Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Alter.


Love would be
our atoms
aligned.
Something that life altering.
Sugarhigh, sugarrushed, sugarcrazy.
Crazy.

Know each fibre of my body
as well as your contours
under my fingers
are known.
Feel earnestly for me;
realize
I miss you
so much I could
turn to vapor
and rain over you.
Love, yes,
has to be that.

Anything less would
not
be obsessing, insane, delirious;
Anything less would
not
drive me nuts;
Anything less would
not
be worth it.

10 comments:

  1. this is the most crazily beautiful thing i have read in a really long time.

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  2. Love would be the perfect chaos, maximum entropy, and you'll be crazy, crazy and definitely worth it. To know each contour, each line, and each feature with a touch? That's devout loving :D

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. Furree Katt, aw, thanks SO much!

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  4. M-Era*, glad you found it so. :)

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  5. Blasphemous Aesthete, I enjoy your comments the most. :)
    And exactly, love has to be all those things, I believe.

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  6. Awesome! The cloud/vapour metaphor is larger than life...sheer poetry... and I wonder if you realize that...

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  7. I did, I think. Thanks so much. :)

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