Wednesday, May 5, 2010

two

I look out                                                                                                                                   from within you
then I close my eyes,                                                                                                                                         I dream   and spin thoughts                                                                                                                                                                        of freedom,
of your absence                                                                                                                                                            that is so liberating.

4 comments:

  1. Nice.
    Liked the way you wrote it.
    Though I spotted it only after you had explained.

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  2. Yeah, I suppose that's the trouble with this!

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  3. I love the way you wrote this. I mean typed it out. As well as the writing of course. But i read it in different ways, and seemed to get new meanings every time.

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  4. Aayushi, thanks a lot for this! I thought no one would totally be able to figure it out.. I was probably giving people less credit than I should! Thanks for commenting! :)

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