I look out from within you
then I close my eyes, I dream and spin thoughts of freedom,
of your absence that is so liberating.
Nice.
ReplyDeleteLiked the way you wrote it.
Though I spotted it only after you had explained.
Yeah, I suppose that's the trouble with this!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this. I mean typed it out. As well as the writing of course. But i read it in different ways, and seemed to get new meanings every time.
ReplyDeleteAayushi, thanks a lot for this! I thought no one would totally be able to figure it out.. I was probably giving people less credit than I should! Thanks for commenting! :)
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